Author Topic: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky  (Read 5881 times)

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #30 on: September 24, 2009, 12:49:12 AM »
It's not the most original situation, but myself I don't know where would I take such precise situation.
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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #31 on: September 26, 2009, 07:17:17 PM »
Oh, thanks, I guess I didn't notice that line.

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #32 on: September 28, 2009, 12:06:47 AM »
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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #33 on: September 28, 2009, 01:00:45 AM »
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why not just sticky it!?/does this mean the next one is out!?

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #34 on: September 28, 2009, 01:07:31 AM »
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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #35 on: September 28, 2009, 02:28:25 AM »
lol sry I like never check the blog DX

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #36 on: September 29, 2009, 07:28:24 AM »
Your fanbase has just increased by 1!  /coy

Love the story, keep up the great work woxxy  XXD

(Improvements? The grammar is fine on the whole but a few improvements here and there will make the story even better)
Nothing to see here, move along.

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #37 on: September 29, 2009, 07:39:19 AM »
Your fanbase has just increased by 1!  /coy

Love the story, keep up the great work woxxy  XXD

(Improvements? The grammar is fine on the whole but a few improvements here and there will make the story even better)

That's because M proof'd it. ^D


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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #38 on: September 29, 2009, 07:41:21 AM »
Not really. Only the first section. I did second, but I closed FF and I lost everything.



I don't have time :(

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #39 on: September 29, 2009, 07:48:44 AM »
well I do have time... but as shown in my style of speech/writing/typing, my grammar/english is questionable at best. I only have a somewhat above average vocabulary  :-\ 

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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #40 on: September 29, 2009, 07:52:17 AM »
I sorta have the time.. but I'm not sure if people want me proofing.. yet.


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Re: [Official] Nights, Watching the purple sky
« Reply #41 on: September 29, 2009, 04:09:15 PM »
I sorta have the time.. but I'm not sure if people want me proofing.. yet.
Just proofread the second half of the chapter.

I can take it as 50% of the test. Honestly wouldn't mind having you in the team. You look like a reliable person anyway. Even if you weren't as good as proofreader as we need (but you might be), I know you can do a lot more.

Just take the .docx and do what you want with it, even changes in storytelling if you feel something is wrong. Use the Word functions for reviewing and activate "track changes". Use the comment system for more indepth stuff, if needed.

In FoOls we use similar systems in the wiki, but not so cool as those in word...

EDIT: DON'T FORGET TO REDOWNLOAD THE LATEST VERSION! I actively update it, without saying it.
« Last Edit: September 29, 2009, 04:12:52 PM by Woxxy »
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